In this grand design of things you actually secure  a B- just for effort. Exactly where you misplaced us was first in your facts. As people say, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more true right here. Having said that, allow me inform you precisely what did do the job. Your text is definitely extremely persuasive which is possibly why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not really convinced of just how you seem to unite the ideas which inturn help to make your conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your position however trust in the foreseeable future you connect the dots better.